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Tuesday, October 24, 2017

Here is a colour poem
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  1. AnonymousOctober 30, 2017 at 6:08 PM

    hi i love your poem it gave me ideas for my next post
    also check out my youtube channel its called ben strongman it at the top of the list

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  2. AnonymousNovember 6, 2017 at 5:36 PM

    Hi Abd-alrahman

    I like your colour poem. I did one colour poem, My one was a Blue one. Do you have another favourite colour?

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    1. AnonymousNovember 20, 2017 at 11:49 AM

      Hi Aadil I do have an other favourite colour it is red but I also like black. Do you have another favourite colour?

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  3. AnonymousNovember 6, 2017 at 5:43 PM

    Namaste Abd-alrahman
    I really like your post about your colour poem! I learnt so much about your favourite colour, gold. What are your next steps? Maybe next time you could change the colour of your background.
    Kind Regards Mariam Year 3

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  4. AnonymousNovember 19, 2017 at 5:45 PM

    Hi Abd-alrahman
    I really liked how you used the 5 scences and I liked how you used a rainbow to put your name and the date.
    Next time can you write more words in it.
    By Janet from Rm15

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  5. AnonymousNovember 19, 2017 at 5:50 PM

    Hi Abd-Alrahman/Lil John
    I really liked how you described it really well gold is 4th favourite colour and you described it really good WooHoo! Nice work my Lil Friend!

    Kind Regards Heamapo!

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  6. AnonymousNovember 23, 2017 at 12:29 PM

    Hi Abd-alrahman,
    Great Work
    I Did One Too
    My Colour Was Gold Too
    Keep Up The Great Work
    Peace Out
    Valerie

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